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Feb. 18th, 2009 | 12:00 pm
mood: lonely lonely

2/13/07


*Happy Valentines Day*

 

What is so good about Valentines Day?
Someone told me that it is a day when people have things to say.
Say I love you and I care
The words that everyone share

But I don't celebrate Valentines, want to know why?
Because it is three days after my brother died
I always told him I loved him but not on that special day
Things are bottled up because I sill have things to say

What should I do when I'm feeling down and out?
When I want to scream and shout
I sit and write
Because I know everything will be alright

 

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viteacher

From: viteacher
Date: Feb. 19th, 2009 06:26 pm (UTC)
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It's good that you've found comfort in writing, Delcia, because it is something you will be able to lean on when things get tough. I'm sorry that you're not able to enjoy Valentine's the same way as everyone else, and while I can't say it will get easier, I can say confidently that you seem to be addressing your feelings in a positive and mature way. Way to go, and great poem. :)

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peaceoutkid_09

From: peaceoutkid_09
Date: Feb. 20th, 2009 04:29 pm (UTC)
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Thank you very much

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viteacher

From: viteacher
Date: Feb. 21st, 2009 06:01 pm (UTC)
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Thanks for sharing, Delcia. Keep it up!

(100/100)

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sammypooh97

From: sammypooh97
Date: Feb. 23rd, 2009 06:57 pm (UTC)
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THIS WAS NICE. I THINK U SHLDNT LET THIS ONE DAY CHANGE ANYTHING. U NEVER LET THIS ONE DAY BE THE DAY THAT U TOLD UR BROTHER THAT YOU LOVED HIM WHICH WAS NICE. EVERYONE WANTS TO KNOW THAT THEY ARE LOVED AND NOT JUST ON VALENTINES DAY. AND EVEN THOUGH U NEVER TOLD UR BROTHER THAT U LOVED HIM ON THAT DAY I THINK HE KNOWS THAT YOU DO LOVE HIM. WHY? BECUASE U CONSTANTLY USE TO TELL IT TO HIM AND HE KNEW THAT ALTHOUGH THAT U DIDNT TELL IT TO HIM ON THAT DAY, THAT U DID LOVE HIM.

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